Feedback Wanted: Short Story Exploration

This post is something a little different. Instead of featuring any of my thoughts it’s a portion of a short story written by a friend. So why am I posting it? Well, to support him and his writing and to give him a little feedback. He basically has two questions:

  • Would you like to read the entire story?
  • Based on what you’ve read could you see this working as a play or film?

So without further ado – here it is!

Let us know what you think!